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Angel Lullaby by °euphoria:iconeuphoria:



rest your cheek on linen
and slowly close your eyes
fold your wings around you
with the sound of angel sighs

let me tell you stories
of castles, knights and kings
dragons killed and glory won
and the truth that honor brings

smile for me with sleepy gaze
and let me touch your hair
I'll wonder at its orange-blond shade
and your porcelain skin so fair

dream of all that you could be
when your angel wings are grown
and someday you will see yourself
what I have always known

For you are just a cherub now
with a sweet and innocent face
but I promise you that someday soon
you'll grow in courage and grace

And when the day has finally come
to open your wings and fly
I'll pray I've done the best for you
and tearfully wave goodbye.
©2002-2009 °euphoria
:iconeuphoria:

Author's Comments

This was written for my 4-year-old son, Alex William-Christopher. He is strong, gifted, and beautiful. He is an incredibly adorable child, and I would do anything in the world for him. Sometimes I ask myself if I'm doing everything right...if he will grow up strong and happy and be the kind of man that he should be.

This was written as I tucked him into bed for the 80th time last night, against protests like, "I can't go to bed! It's almost morning. I won't have time to sleep anyway."

How does one argue with THAT? ;) (Wink)

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:iconrascalb:
Very good job. I have always been impressed with your poetry. The lyrical style of this is soothing and it might even work as a song. Excellent.
:iconwife2:
And when the day has finally come
to open your wings and fly
I'll pray I've done the best for you
and tearfully wave goodbye.


Every parent hopes they've done thier best, and dreads having to say goodbye.

Wow. That is beautiful. My favorite excuse from my daughter on why she doesn't want to go to bed - "But, mommy - i don't wanna sleep - it's too dark when my eyes are closed". I try not to laugh, but sometimes I can't help it. 4 year olds are a trip.


--
~Melissa~

It's not what you have in life that matters, it's who you share it with.

:nana:
:iconbreid:
Gentle and beautiful. Great work.

IMHO, the "smile for me with sleepy gaze" doesn't really fit with the rest of the imagery and breaks the rhythm. But still nice.
:iconneywon:
I love it, brigns to mind memories of my own children when they were so young and innocent. Very well written.
:icon-muse-:
This is a sweet, soft, gentle, and comforting poem. Absolutely lovely, and the image of your son is truly angelic. I adored reading this - a soothing lullaby of words.
...and with as much love as you so clearly have for him, I'm sure your son will grow up and be a wonderful man.
Hug

-muse-
be well
:iconlzrelak:
Very nice poem...very well written. I can't exactly relate to this poem, but I do find it very soothing to know that is what inside a parents head.
:iconspunj13:
all right....despite the fact that i have no kids of my own... i love this piece... i mean LOVE this piece... it's beautiful... tangible and touching... i can't come up with enough words to do it justice really

//spunj13

--
doctor!doctor!
wind up your soldiers and send them to see, the skies and the oceans their coffins will be
:iconobsuedia:
That was incredibly beautiful.

--
Nothing is so strong as gentleness, nothing so gentle as real strength. St. Francis de Sales
~* Sue
:iconost2life:
*Personal Comment
After the insanly awful day I've had I really needed something to cheer me up. thankyou euphoria

*Poet Comment
It's a beatufully written piece, with all the love and joy that being a parent has, poured into it's 24 lines. I positivly loved reading the poem +fav

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the :spork: is strong in you
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