rest your cheek on linen
and slowly close your eyes
fold your wings around you
with the sound of angel sighs
let me tell you stories
of castles, knights and kings
dragons killed and glory won
and the truth that honor brings
smile for me with sleepy gaze
and let me touch your hair
I'll wonder at its orange-blond shade
and your porcelain skin so fair
dream of all that you could be
when your angel wings are grown
and someday you will see yourself
what I have always known
For you are just a cherub now
with a sweet and innocent face
but I promise you that someday soon
you'll grow in courage and grace
And when the day has finally come
to open your wings and fly
I'll pray I've done the best for you
and tearfully wave goodbye.














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to open your wings and fly
I'll pray I've done the best for you
and tearfully wave goodbye.
Every parent hopes they've done thier best, and dreads having to say goodbye.
Wow. That is beautiful. My favorite excuse from my daughter on why she doesn't want to go to bed - "But, mommy - i don't wanna sleep - it's too dark when my eyes are closed". I try not to laugh, but sometimes I can't help it. 4 year olds are a trip.
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~Melissa~
It's not what you have in life that matters, it's who you share it with.
IMHO, the "smile for me with sleepy gaze" doesn't really fit with the rest of the imagery and breaks the rhythm. But still nice.
...and with as much love as you so clearly have for him, I'm sure your son will grow up and be a wonderful man.
-muse-
be well
//spunj13
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doctor!doctor!
wind up your soldiers and send them to see, the skies and the oceans their coffins will be
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Nothing is so strong as gentleness, nothing so gentle as real strength. St. Francis de Sales
~* Sue
After the insanly awful day I've had I really needed something to cheer me up. thankyou euphoria
*Poet Comment
It's a beatufully written piece, with all the love and joy that being a parent has, poured into it's 24 lines. I positivly loved reading the poem
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