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we sit across the table,
and our gazes are the only things that touch
somehow we know this is how it must be

bound close as atoms in their spin, yet
destined to move like comets, flashing
briefly then continuing through the black


I need you here,
need your gravity to keep me steady
the pull of you balances everything


and yet we are lost, you retreat from
my heart at the speed of light, i cannot
even find you now within the endless skies


and so our gazes touch
across the miles contained in inches of space
bridged only by our mutual thoughts


and i think to myself, we
are alone in the universe
:iconeuphoria:
what happens when you meet your soulmate?

You fall in love and are together forever?

Sometimes.

Sometimes life gets in the way.

Another collab between myself and deejbard. [link]
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:iconelgatodiablo:
i want to see you write something dark.

brooding

not just something that you think sounds moody, i want you to get pissed and ready to punch something and then sit down and bash the keyboard for 15 minutes. submit it. dont edit at all.

ive looked over a dozen or so of your pieces and they all have the same basic theme, and almost all of your submissions are either emotional or romantic. kick the habit and start new.
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:icontwilight-ashes:
whoa... this poem is SO extremely well-written... i LOVE it!! Love excellent work, you two! Thumbs Up Thumbs Up (one for each of you...
... nahh, just kidding! :D (Big Grin) :P (Razz) ... two thumbs up for the both of you! see the difference? :D (Big Grin) :) (Smile) )

(actually, i feel that there should be an 'I' before the 'need' in the 8th line... but s'alright :) (Smile) )

definitely one'a my favorites nonetheless... :) (Smile)
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:iconcouchfry:
thanks for sharing this collab, it's truly melancholic. the thought of it alone makes me shiver and then wonder why.....why it has to be so, why life has to be so cruel only to protect us from reality..... the message behind is touching and sad :( (Sad)
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~ there is no cure for what plagues our society, stupidity
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:icongaston:
i know my words will probably just be a rehash of the previous ones, but i really must say this poetry truly touches me deep. yeah, and i know that sounds cheesy too, but it's true. i can so relate to this - to the belief, the experience, and ahh... the despair.

what a perfect metaphor you've chosen as well - the comet. so beautiful, ethereal, mysterious, yet only comes rarely in our lifetime. you've definitely captured the perfect image to embody the spirit of this poetry.

i feel weird now. your poetry is not only beautiful, but powerful as well. it moves me to reminisce my own experience with the one i thought to be "my comet"...

i need a hug now. :( (Sad)

+gaston



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:icondeathsedge:
I like this. Its unusual for a poem that isnt morbid to atract my attention but this is so well written that I had to comment. i like the flow of this and the raw emotion used. amazing stuff.


where light falls there is suffering
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Where light falls there is suffering
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:iconmastermindg:
those last two lines are quite nice. your collabs are great, euph and deej both.
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mastermindNod
Shit Happens Doh!
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:iconkeen:
`keen Apr 2, 2002   Writer
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damn.




and YOU of all ppl KNOW i can relate to this as it was my own shatter-resonance.






nice work you two. Thumbs Up







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~ngnd25 Apr 1, 2002   Writer
This poem touched me deeply. For there are those that are just flashes in our lives that affect us so much. This poem echos that. Thank you for sharing.

ngnd25
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:icongottmacher:
::Sighs softly:: So familiar, so close to the surface. Thank you for the chance to relive an old feeling through someone else.
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:iconnamaste:
oh, you dragged a cry of pain out of me, reading this, seeing you both in it. so powerfully and well done.
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