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how do I know I love you?
a simple question
with more answers than we have kisses
and more reasons
than you have time to hear

your smile makes me wish for immortality
if only to see it over and over for always
and to be in your presence
is be myself
comfortably
with no pretense
or need for impressions

minutes spent without you
tick by slower than years
but the sweet promise of us
brings a secret smile
and a calm assurance
that leaves a delicious taste in my mouth

the way you look at me
makes everything in the world
stop and wait for us
and the way our eyes love to touch gazes
makes my heart hug itself with contented delight

I am stronger because of you
and yet weaker all at once
but I would not trade this sweet vulnerability
the sacred opening of everything I am -
I willingly offer it,
because I feel your desire to see it,
to cherish it as you cherish my kisses

I have begun to think of you
as an extension of me
another part that I have always searched for
and somehow never found
two pieces of symmetry
finally joined to make something
not just beautiful,
but destined.

And so when you ask
your voice hushed by the lateness of the hour
curiosity touched with wonder
how it is that I know?
It is easy to answer you now, love.

It is because my soul is smiling.
©2002-2009 °euphoria
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Thank you to the following people who gave me the idea for this:

faithwalker
deejbard
namaste
invictus-muse
whitelightning
mkinne

I think I got everyone...if not, I am REALLY sorry...
This is everyone's ideas together, but underneath it all, it is exactly how I feel.
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Possibly the best definition of love I have ever read!
beautiful poem... and as faithwalker pointed out, a wonderful defenition of love. Love
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i agree with the other two. this is an amazing poem about love. its so good and very accurate. it is the type of poem that anyone truly in love can relate to.
Very good :) (Smile)
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Gosh, I wish there was a choice to vote "Love Deviation". This is such expressive and imaginative writing. Gosh, if my stuff was half this good... I would just die. Jealous, I am so jealous...
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:D (Big Grin)
sigh....


beautiful....



dreaming on....
gorgeous words, kit. not sure what i had to do with this, but i'm glad.

:) (Smile)


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I refuse to accept the view that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism and war that the bright daybreak of peace and brotherhood can never become reality. I believe that unarmed truth and unconditional love will have the final word.

Martin Luther King, Jr.
beautiful indeed, and true.
the only addition i would have made, but was too late to do so, was:

you know when you can't NOT know.
when trying to deny it would entail denying your belief in God and yourself and everything you have come to understand of the universe.

but your poem said it prettier. :) (Smile)


Truly beautiful. I am lost for words...
Love is everything that you've wrote, and also so much more than that. It's the reason that makes you wake up every morning just to see your love lying beside you. It's the spice of life, and fuel for the soul. I can go on and on, but it will be rather pointless since you've desribed it most wonderfully in these enchanting words.
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