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Starfall - for Corey by °euphoria:iconeuphoria:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


I wonder if stars make wishes as they fall;
with hopes as high as their starting point
and dreams painted in the colors of a rainbow.

I wonder if they find what they seek.
Do they fall into their heart's desire,
smiling with sweet contentment?

Does the night miss them once they're gone
as much as I miss you?
Do they miss their place in the liquid midnight;
or would they,
(like me)
gladly

fall

again and again?
©2003-2009 °euphoria
:iconeuphoria:

Author's Comments

This, like everything else I have to give, is for the one who brings a smile to my face, and joy to my heart.

I love you, Corporal. ;)

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:iconthirdhandsaucer:
~thirdhandsaucer Nov 19, 2003, 8:51:24 PM
what an interesting thought.
very nice. nice questioning.
i love this. the beggining is a very catchy
verse.
great work.

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.imagine.
:iconpaladin1:
~paladin1 Nov 19, 2003, 9:06:43 PM
You are amazing.
Your words have meanings far greater than their definitions.
I love the way you write. You are beyond perfect. You must be an angel. I love you, more than all the stars in the sky.
:iconcurran:
*curran Nov 19, 2003, 9:08:43 PM
Best. Opening. Ever.

Excellent work Kit. I really dig that first part, just such a beautiful idea of stars making wishes. Really good emotion, as usual for you. Bravo :)

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Okay, idiots, thanks to the legions of morons who decide that this box of text can be used as a judgement of character, I will cease to have any kind of quality or thoughtful signature. Thanks a whole lot.
:iconspunj13:
`spunj13 Nov 19, 2003, 11:02:45 PM
i would fall...

again

with the stars... and wish to fall again...

[spunj13]

--
doctor!doctor!
wind up your soldiers and send them to see, the skies and the oceans their coffins will be
:iconbuildingclimber:
=buildingclimber Nov 19, 2003, 11:56:50 PM
your skill and gift of expression your ability to paint with words is nothing less than grand.:+fav:
:iconawestruck-clay:
~awestruck-clay Nov 20, 2003, 4:01:53 AM
heh. you're such a sap. so sappy. ;)


:hug: :heart:


well written though.






sap

--
Jesu kom til jorden for a do.
:iconrcybergeek:
~rcybergeek Nov 20, 2003, 6:26:46 AM
:w00t:
You write so infrequently, it is good to see a new one. This one is one of your best, I think.

--
rCyberGeek

Boldly going whereever I am told.
:iconprufock:
~prufock Nov 20, 2003, 9:12:45 AM
i'm too science-minded to enjoy this poem. i keep thinking "star's don't actually fall."
:iconprufock:
~prufock Nov 20, 2003, 9:15:51 AM
[expletive deleted] typos. remove apostrophe.
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