it is in the sting of carnal kisses and symbiotic delight
that on your curving flesh alight
the bliss of lulling hands, singing to your skin
aliven, awaken, thy bending tongue and whetted sin
~awaken, yes, to this vision
dreamwalking through your touches
sighing through your kisses
as their edges catch warm, moist flesh
oh, sultry lips of Thine entreat
the soothing warmth of our embrace
to enthrall writhing thighs with whit
a tongue that calls thy mind to fit
oh, sultry lips of Mine repeat.
~repeat my name in hushed whispers
tinged with smoky desire
and pleasured want-need
take all of my skin underneath you
and slip into the warmth that I offer
within thy passionate cult
I wish to worship until sun breaks
through the fragility of your touch
where licking winds of substance cease
and murmurs of desire feast
on the tangibility of our trembling
unto the storms of desires reached;
fallen on your snow-white skin.














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overall, it's just a really beautifully worded sentiment of an intimate moment (or three). wonderful work from you and the mystery fellow.
milath
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Forgive your enemies. It messes with their heads.
"Thy love is a red, red rose...
And I am a little thorny..."
No, that was "the Mask" on last night...
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as i read through this poetic venture, i found myself somewhat left behind the standard concept of eroticism in my own mind, due to the very nature that i'm a bit more vulgar and less inclined to the usage of larger and more descriptive words. this played out more like intellectual fucking than low down and dirty. how's that?
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wow...
im not worthy to comment on something this magnificient....
i knew you were an excellent writer..im really wondering who the other guy was!
i simply love the imagery and language, the metaphorical lyricism is perfect. why must you always be so good kit?! especially when you do colabs, whew. i cannot describe how wonderful this is. +favs obviously!
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