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it is in the sting of carnal kisses and symbiotic delight
that on your curving flesh alight
the bliss of lulling hands, singing to your skin
aliven, awaken, thy bending tongue and whetted sin

~awaken, yes, to this vision
dreamwalking through your touches
sighing through your kisses
as their edges catch warm, moist flesh

oh, sultry lips of Thine entreat
the soothing warmth of our embrace
to enthrall writhing thighs with whit
a tongue that calls thy mind to fit
oh, sultry lips of Mine repeat.

~repeat my name in hushed whispers
tinged with smoky desire
and pleasured want-need
take all of my skin underneath you
and slip into the warmth that I offer

within thy passionate cult
I wish to worship until sun breaks
through the fragility of your touch
where licking winds of substance cease
and murmurs of desire feast
on the tangibility of our trembling
unto the storms of desires reached;
fallen on your snow-white skin.
©2002-2009 °euphoria
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Author's Comments

This is a collaboration between myself and a poet that shall remain nameless, simply because he didn't feel comfortable attaching his name. I love this poem, and so I put it up. =) (Smile)

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:iconsans-soleil:
wow, reminds me of the poets of yesteryear, such beautiful meter keeping pace. most sensous a peice. +favs of course, you should be celebrated in your own time!
:iconhyper-psycho:
Very nice ... cool poem ... ;) (Wink)

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:iconmilath:
normally don't like the rhyming poetry, but this really caught my imagination. i agree with an earlier comment in that this piece reminds me of an older style of poetry. perhaps it's the language, which harkens to days of yore, with 'thy', 'thine' and 'whit', etc..

overall, it's just a really beautifully worded sentiment of an intimate moment (or three). wonderful work from you and the mystery fellow.

milath
:icondreamz13:
Very controlled passion. Or maybe I should say well-defined.

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:iconbreid:
As the bard would say...

"Thy love is a red, red rose...
And I am a little thorny..."

No, that was "the Mask" on last night...
:iconchesterfield:
this is the product of 2 overindulged poet wannabes stuck in an instan messenger with a hard-on and wet panties

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to love is to lose
and to lose is to die
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:iconchesterfield:
let me clean up my comment for the sake of sanity:

[Like Deviation]

as i read through this poetic venture, i found myself somewhat left behind the standard concept of eroticism in my own mind, due to the very nature that i'm a bit more vulgar and less inclined to the usage of larger and more descriptive words. this played out more like intellectual fucking than low down and dirty. how's that?

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to love is to lose
and to lose is to die
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:iconmastermindg:
um..

wow...

im not worthy to comment on something this magnificient....Worship Nod

i knew you were an excellent writer..im really wondering who the other guy was!

i simply love the imagery and language, the metaphorical lyricism is perfect. why must you always be so good kit?! especially when you do colabs, whew. i cannot describe how wonderful this is. +favs obviously!

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