what would happen
if i traced the words
i want you
on the back of your hand
pushed my chair just a bit closer
and let my knee
barely touch yours
under this table
what would you say
if my eyes lingered at your lips
and saw myself kissing them
before lifting my gaze to match your own
and bringing the corner of my hungry mouth
up oh-so-slightly
just enough to tell you what I'm thinking
what would we do
if the strap on my dress
slipped down my shoulder
of its own accord
and i left it there
curling around my arm
just like i want your fingers to
what would happen
if i invaded this space between us
gave you the chance for only a fleeting moment
to touch me as I hope you want to
would you let me in
or would your fingertips drop to the band
golden around your finger
twisting it slowly
as you walk away















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What would happen?
My mind will explode.
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Imgs. flashing thue my brain.... So vivit so real, like I AM there.... hoping U will let the strap fall.... Let the beast aweke.... be.... BE.... And then the poem ends....
I woot like to know wat you kan do in 6 min.s
Take care.
See ya.
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you set it up perfectly ... the beauty of the seduction, the bittersweet ending.
now i know your mama taught you not to tease these men. They really aren't good at resisting. Hey that's what my Mama told me! Ha! you probably didn't expect them to be so easy ...or... so hard to resist. Uh, I think that is all I have to say right here. Your poem is beautiful, is beautiful really is so compellingly beautiful and nobody writes seduction like you ms. kit.
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you rock.
(and I mean that in the nicest possible way...
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And then the record player screeches to a halt. The band is twisted, and anger rushes to my mouth as I scream at the screen "Damn! You fool!"
With this roller coaster ride, a definite
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